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Much Ahoof About Nothing Part 4 starring Princess Celestia and her faithful student Twilight Sparkle

Moments later, there was a loud whoosh as a multi-coloured streak flew overhead and Rainbow Dash came in to land on the cloud not far away from the assembled group and quickly trotted up to them.

"It's so awesome that you guys could all come!" she said, grinning at her friends. Then she bowed to Celestia and Luna, saying "Spitfire sends her apologies, Your Highnesses  - she's still not happy with some of the choreography and she wants to fit in as much rehearsal as possible before tonight."

Celestia smiled. "It sounds as if you have a wonderful show prepared for us tonight."

Rainbow nodded enthusiastically, but then frowned suddenly. "I just hope everything goes according to plan…" …and nopony screws anything up! A vision of a certain blonde-maned Pegasus pony with quizzical eyes appeared before her and she resisted groaning out loud.

But Rainbow didn't have time to worry about Derpy for long, as Rarity cantered up to her and threw her forelegs around her neck.

"Oh Rainbow," she said. "We're so glad you're here! We've all missed you terribly." The unicorn looked meaningfully at Twilight, who blinked at her, uncomprehending.

Rainbow chuckled somewhat nervously as she extricated herself from Rarity's perfumed embrace. "He he he – thanks Rarity," she said. "It's just been a week, though. I've been away for longer than that before."

Rarity's face took on a pained expression. "But without you around, we've all felt so empty! Haven't we, Twilight?" She again turned to the unicorn pony and leaned forward, coaxing.

Twilight frowned at her. "Excuse me?"

"Oh, you know," said Rarity, arching her eyebrows. "As if we were missing something?"

Pinkie suddenly interposed herself between the two unicorns. "Oh, I know!" she said, bobbing her head up and down. "I've totally missed Dashie and our little pranking sessions."

"Pinkie, darling, I don't think…" began Rarity, but Pinkie was already bouncing around, lost in her own little world.

"Oh oh oh! And there's all this rainbow Castella left over at Sugarcube Corner, 'cos you're not around to eat it!" She brought a hoof to her chin and looked thoughtful for a moment, "No, wait a second! I ate all that left over Castella." She rubbed her head sheepishly. "Sorry!"

Rainbow shrugged, a polite smile on her face. "Aw, don't worry about it Pinkie Pie. They've been feeding me well here in Canterlot." She patted her stomach. "I've got to be careful though – the reason the 'Bolts needed me was because Soarin went on a pie binge and got too fat to fit into his costume. Just how he got the keys to the Royal storeroom, I have no idea."

Celestia looked sideways through narrowed eyes at Luna, who shrugged. "He kept complaining of feeling hungry," said the Princess of the Night. "And Canterlot is famous for its delightful pastries, is it not? I was merely trying to make him feel at home."

"So you guys have really been missing me?" Rainbow's rose-coloured eyes glistened with emotion.

"Oh yes," said Fluttershy, but before she could continue Rarity jumped in between her and Rainbow.

"Of course, darling!" said the unicorn. "Why, just the other day Twilight was mentioning how much she was looking forward to watching the aerial spectacular you have organised for tonight. It's all she's been talking about recently."

"Really?" Rainbow turned to the lavender-coated unicorn and grinned at her. "Thanks Twilight – I promise I totally won't let you down."

Twilight looked at the Pegasus, confusion reigning on her face. "Uh, but I…"

"Now then," said Applejack. "Why don' we continue this romantical conversation over vittles!"

"'Romantical'?" frowned Twilight.

Celestia's eyes flickered from Twilight to Rainbow and she smiled. "An excellent idea, Applejack," she said. "You must all be hungry after your exciting journey. Please be seated, everypony."

"Please, sister! You must sit here," said Luna, pulling the chair at the head of the table out with her telekinetic magic.

Celestia stared at the glowing chair. "Thank you, Luna – but the position of honour must…"

Luna rolled her eyes. "Oh Tia! I thought you said we'd be dispensing with all that tiresome formality today. I shall be perfectly happy at your other side. Besides, I am sure that you and Twilight Sparkle have many things to talk over!" And with that she helped the lavender-coated unicorn sit down beside the Princess of the Sun.

Rarity winked at Applejack and with a sparkle of magical energy she pulled the chair on the other side of Twilight away just as Pinkie Pie was about to sit down on it. The little pink pony fell rump-first onto the fluffy white surface of the cloud and bounced away a short distance.

"Oh dear!" said Rarity, trotting over to her and helping her to her feet. "My apologies, Pinkie Pie, but I need you to sit next to me so that we can have a nice chat about…" She lifted her eyes and darted them back and forth as she tried to come up with a plausible subject. "Why yes, of course. Baking!"

"Baking? Oooh!" And with that Pinkie jumped back onto her hooves and sat down in the proffered seat while Rarity took the one next to her.

Rarity shook her head. Baking? Oh dear Celestia, what had she just got herself into!

"Now Rainbow, here's your seat," said Applejack, pulling out the chair that was next to Twilight. "An' ah'll jus' set myself down here…"

Rainbow began to protest, but Applejack brought a hoof to the Pegasus' lips.

"Now no need ta thank me," she said. "It ain't no hassle whatsoever."

"My, what courtly manners," said Rarity as the earth pony sat down next to her. "Darling Applejack, you've outdone yourself!"

"Aw shucks," said Applejack, and Rarity looked with such sudden heat into her green eyes that she blushed.

Fluttershy and Spike, meanwhile, had sat themselves down on the other side of the table and with everypony now seated, Luna levitated a glass of sarsaparilla up into the air and tapped it with a spoon.

"Everypony, if I can have your attention," said Luna. She turned to Celestia. "I hope my sister does not mind me taking the initiative and saying a few words."

Celestia smiled. "Not at all, Luna. Today is your special day, after all."

"I'd just like to thank you all for coming," said Luna, her eyes going from pony to pony. "You have all performed numerous services on my behalf, from rescuing me from the prison of my anger and jealousy, Nightmare Moon, to helping me to reintegrate into modern Equestrian society."

"Disintegrate?" stuttered Pinkie Pie, her eyes going wide in horror.

Rarity placed a forehoof softly on Pinkie's to calm her. "Re-integrate, darling," she explained. "It means to be reintroduced."

Luna continued. "As I can no longer consider you my subjects, but my friends, I hereby propose a toast – a toast to the magic of friendship!"

"To the magic of friendship!" everypony said in unison as they leaned forwards and clinked their glasses together.

The high tea got underway, and once everypony had finished their sarsaparilla, Princess Celestia floated an ornate china tea pot about the table, filling everypony's cups with hot fragrant tea.

"What tea is this, Princess?" asked Fluttershy, taking a dainty sniff of the steaming cup. "It smells delicious!"

"It's from the aurora tea-bush," Twilight told her. "camellia effulgens, which grows only in the Sunrise Mountains. It's the Princess's favourite." But then she looked towards Celestia and blushed deeply, suddenly self-conscious that she'd answered for her.

Celestia laughed. "You know me so well, Twilight Sparkle!" She levitated the tea-pot back to her place at the table and finally poured cups for Luna and herself. "It is my favourite, although I do love all the other wonderful teas that Equestria has to offer."

Everypony took a sip, and even those who didn't usually drink tea agreed that it was, indeed, delicious.

"Luna informs me that she has quite a marvellous evening organised for us," said Celestia, turning to her little sister, who gave a jaunty salute with a forehoof.

"I've been in training for this evening for a long while," explained Luna. "The moon shall be in marvellous form tonight. And as you all are aware, the Wonderbolts are in charge of the fireworks this year." She turned to Rainbow Dash, who was already half-way through a cupcake.

The Pegasus put the treat back down on her plate, her mouth still covered in crumbs as she grinned hugely. "We've got a little surprise in store for you guys," she said. "It's gearing up to be the best Spring Moon Celebration ever!"

"It all sounds marvellous!" said Celestia. She turned to the others. "I do so hope none of you had any other plans for this evening. It completely skipped my mind to ask you all to bring a date if you wished."

"A date?" Twilight's face became suddenly troubled.

Celestia's noticed the look and her heart sank. "Oh, I'm so sorry, Twilight Sparkle. You had a date for this evening and…"

Twilight smiled, shaking her head. "Oh no, Princess. I'm not dating anypony at the moment. It was just that..."

"Oh?" Celestia managed to hide the look of relief on her face as soon as it appeared. "You haven't met any nice stallions or mares in Ponyville?"

"Well," said Twilight, embarrassed. "It's not that I haven't met anypony nice…"

Applejack discretely jabbed an elbow into Rarity's side. The unicorn  grimaced, but she ignored the pain and managed to turn and smile sweetly at Twilight.

"Why of course you have, darling," she said. "I mean, Ponyville is home to some of the fastest and bravest ponies after all. Who wouldn't find their head turned by some beauty or another, with a gorgeous body toned by athleticism and eyes aglow with determination?"

"Eyes aglow with… what?" said Twilight, her brow furrowing in confusion.

"Well, I most certainly do not have a date either," said Luna, raising her snout in the air. "I have yet to find anypony suitable."

"What do you look for in a partner, Princess?" It was Fluttershy's shy little voice, suddenly piping up for the first time. She had been listening to the conversation intently, her cyan eyes flicking back and forth from speaker to speaker. But when everypony looked at her she blushed. "I mean, if you don't mind me asking."

"Oh, of course not," said Luna. "It is the perfect time to be talking about matters of the heart." She suddenly looked serious. "I would need to meet somepony like my first love."

Everypony looked at each other in surprise, but it was Pinkie, of course, who dared asked the question that was on everypony's lips.

"Who was it?" babbled the little pink pony, bubbling in excitement and almost bouncing out of her seat. "Oh, please tell us, Princess! Prettyprettyprettypretty pleeeeeeease!"

Luna looked at her, a look of bewilderment on her face. But then she shrugged. "Why, of course. It is, after all, no secret." She sighed. "It was the great Darkmane."

Twilight almost spat out her tea. "Darkmane?" she yelped. "The great tyrant who ruled over the Eastern Plains between the First and Second Griffon Wars?"

Luna managed to look hurt. "A tyrant?" she said. But then her face softened. "Well, perhaps he was a little tyrannical. But you need to understand that there was so much more to his personality…"

Celestia took a sip of tea, clearly trying to hide a smile.

Twilight's eyes were wide. "But he enslaved the ponies of Hoofington and made them build him a statue of himself over forty feet high!"

Luna sighed. "Darkmane always was a bit of a narcissist, it is true. But he had the heart of a poet." Her lips quivered into a soppy smile.

Celestia took a sip of her tea. "You should tell everypony about the poem he wrote you, Lulu."

Luna was scandalised. "Tia!"

Celestia chuckled. "Oh, it's alright. You're among friends here – your reputation is safe."

"Darkmane wrote you a poem?" Twilight asked in disbelief.

Rarity's eyes were wide. "How romantic!"

Fluttershy nodded. "Oh, I just love poetry."

"Ooh ooh!" piped up Pinkie Pie. "Was it a good poem? Did it rhyme? Was it a limerick or a haiku or a-"

Luna looked at the bouncing pink pony with a measure of annoyance. "It was a most excellent poem, and it did rhyme. But it was neither a haiku nor a lim, a lim…" She looked to Celestia for help with the unfamiliar word.

"A limerick," said Celestia. "It's an amusing anapestic poem. They've become most popular in Equestria."

"Yes! Yes!" cried Pinkie. "O, limericks are the most funnest and most rhymingest of all poems! Would you like to hear one, Princess?"

Luna blinked at her. "Well, I-"

But Pinkie was already on top of the table singing:

"There once was a pony called Pinkie,
Who ate the most ginormous twinkie,"

And then she stopped. "Oh, there are hardly any words that rhyme with Pinkie!" she said with a frown. Then a fresh smile  burst onto her face. "Ooh ooh, this one is much better!"

"There once was a Princess called Luna,"

Twilight covered her face with her forehooves. "Oh, please no..."

But nothing was going to stop the little pony now!

"Who wanted the night to come sooner.
So 'round about noon,
She raised up the moon,
Which could only ever happen in a cartoon-a!

Twilight rolled her eyes. "Pinkie Pie, I don't think…"

"A most excellent limerick!" said Celestia with a smile, and Pinkie beamed hugely at the compliment.

But Luna was still deep in reminiscence and hadn't really been listening. "Yes, it was most amusing. And Darkmane – well, he was brave and strong as well, you know," she said. "I once saw him fight a dozen ursa majors at the same time! With his bare hooves!" Her eyes went wide. "And we used to dance up above the storm clouds of an evening." She sighed deeply. "It was… delightful."

"So what happened to this Darkmane fella?" asked Applejack.

"Nopony knows," said Twilight. "One day he just... vanished."

"Without leaving me so much as a goodbye note!" cried Luna, and it was almost as if tears would start at the corners of her teal eyes. She floated a handkerchief over and began to dab at her face with it.

While the others were distracted by the Princess of the Moon's reaction and trying to console her, Twilight slid her head close to Celestia's and whispered. "Did… did you have something to do with Darkmane's disappearance, Princess?"

Twilight felt Celestia's lips open in a smile and her coat tingling under the sudden touch of the Princess's hot, sweetly-scented breath. "I did," she said.

"Did… did you send him to the moon?" whispered Twilight.

Celestia shook her head, and her mane brushed softly against the unicorn's face. "No – but let's just say the fact that there's a comet called 'Darkmane' that visits Equestria every hundred years is not a coincidence."

Twilight shivered. The Princess was always so jovial and kind that Twilight often forgot that she was a being of colossal power, capable of great feats of magic.

Seeing her student's reaction, Celestia quickly said "Oh, but you must remember he deserved it, Twilight Sparkle. You know your history, of course."

Twilight nodded. After all the terrible things he'd done,Darkmane had deserved it, admittedly. But still...

The Princess sighed. "Maybe after another hundred years he'll have learned the error of his ways. I shall have to go and ask him myself, I suppose. I can't ask you to deal with all the individuals I've exiled on my behalf, my dear Twilight Sparkle – although you have proven yourself more than capable of doing it." She chuckled. "You know, I have no idea what I would do without you."

The little unicorn blushed.

"Well, I agree with Princess Luna," said Fluttershy suddenly. "I'd love to meet somepony like Darkmane."

"Wh-whatever do you mean, darling?" asked Rarity, shocked.

"Oh, I don't mean somepony tyrannical," Fluttershy said, shaking her head. "I mean somepony who's brave and strong - but they would need to be kind, as well." Her face glowed with enthusiasm.

"Oh, kind. Yes," said Luna, still sniffing behind her handkerchief. "Kindness is very important too, of course."

"And how about you, Twilight?" asked Spike, who had been listening to the conversation in interest but had not had anything to say.

"Me?" asked the lavender-coated unicorn, suddenly cagey. "Oh, I haven't ever really thought about…"

"Oh darling, what rubbish!" said Rarity. "Everypony thinks about romance."

"Some ponies more th'n others," muttered Applejack cheerfully.

Twilight turned to Celestia for help, but the Princess was looking at her in interest just like the others.

She sighed. "Well, OK – maybe I have thought about it." She lifted her eyes to gaze across the glistening sunlit landscape of Equestria and smiled shyly. "Just a little bit."

"And?" said Spike. He'd never heard Twilight talk about this sort of thing before. It wasn't that she didn't have her admirers – over the past months, he'd had to apologise to a number of Ponyville's bachelors and spinsters at the front door to the Library, explaining that Twilight Sparkle was too busy to see them. And it seemed like every second week Derpy would arrive on the front doorstep – well, crash into it, rather – with another box of chocolates or flowers from some admirer or other. But Twilight had shown no interest in any of them.

And all eyes were on Twilight now, so she coughed and said, "Well, they – this hypothetical pony, I mean – they would have to be-"

Rarity's eyes went large in expectation. "Yes, darling?"

"-they would have to be kind, of course…"

"Oh, of course!" said Rarity, her eyes darting from Twilight to look at Rainbow, who was listening with some interest.

"-and loyal-"

"Oh, most definitely!" exclaimed Rarity, clopping her hooves together.

"-and sensible-"

Rarity looked towards Rainbow and frowned. "Oh, yes, well…"

"-and interested in studying-"

Rarity frowned even deeper. "Studying? But don't you think-?"

"-oh, and-" Twilight said, remembering suddenly. "-she would have to be graceful, too." Her ears turned back and she blushed.

Rarity looked at Rainbow Dash, who was now bored with the conversation and was scratching herself behind an ear, and sighed.

Luna clopped her hooves together. "A most appropriate answer!" she said. "Don't you agree, sister?"

"Of, I would have expected nothing else from my favourite student," said Celestia. Twilight lifted her blushing face just long enough for the Princess to notice, and Celestia, feeling her own cheeks grow hot, quickly continued: "But I must admit to being a little surprised that 'gracefulness' was one of your requirements, Twilight Sparkle."

Twilight looked up at her. "W-well, we were talking about my ideal partner, right?" She looked out across the landscape again. "I mean, it would be nice if she were graceful – I mean, I'm not graceful myself and…"

"Oh, but you are graceful, darling," said Rarity, a little uncomfortably.

"Oh c'mon Rarity," said Spike. "You've seen Twilight dance, right?"

The white-coated unicorn looked at the little purple dragon sternly. "Twilight has a most natural manner, young Spike."

"What about you, Rainbow?" asked Applejack, turning to the Pegasus. "Don'tcha jus' find that sometimes it's the quiet ponies that are the most intriguing-like?"

"Intriguing… like?" repeated Rainbow, a quizzical smile on her face. "Well, I don't really know about all that romance stuff. Seems to me that it just gets in the way of achieving your dreams."

Rarity was scandalised. "But surely finding the pony who is your perfect match is just as important, Rainbow, as any other dream you might have?"

Rainbow was just about to reply when Pinkie Pie piped up. "Well, I hope I never find the pony of my dreams," she said, her mouth full of cucumber sandwiches.

"What in Equestria do you mean, darling?" said Rarity, annoyed by the distraction just as the conversation was going in the direction she wanted.

"Well!" said Pinkie, swallowing hurriedly and leaping into her story. "A few nights ago I was working late at Sugarcube Corner, throwing out the expired apple danishes that I'd found hiding in a corner of the pantry…"

"'Throwin' out?'" said Applejack, her eyes narrowed as she looked at the little pink pony in suspicion. "You, Pinkie Pie, throwin' out food?"

Pinkie's eyes darted left and right. "Well, maybe I ate one or ten of them– but it was late and some of them weren't all that moldy or dusty. So anyway, I was working so hard that I fell asleep and I had this mysterious dream! Well, actually it was more spooooooooky than mysterious…"

"Oh brother," said Twilight, rolling her eyes.

"Let us hear about this dream," said Luna, suddenly curious. "It sounds most delightful!"

"Okie dokie lokie!" said Pinkie Pie happily. "But I must warn you, it's totally spookeriffic!"

"Just tell the story, darling!" said Rarity in irritation.

Pinkie took a deep breath and began her story. "I was walking in a strange forest – it might have been the Everfree forest, but it was even stranger than that super-strange and spooky forest! There were muffins and danishes growing from the trees, and the path I was walking along was covered with powdered sugar…"

Rainbow Dash burst out laughing. "Sounds like your ideal forest, Pinkie Pie!"

Pinkie nodded. "Oh, it would have been! I even found a river filled with hot cocoa and there were all these marshmallows floating along it. I leaned forward to take just the teenie-tiniest little Pinkie Pie taste when I suddenly saw the most strangest stallion I've ever seen in my little pinkie life!" Her eyes bugged out in alarm.

"Wh-what did it look like, Pinkie?" asked Spike, his own eyes going wide.

"Oh, he was totally dark and mysterious," explained Pinkie. "He was an alicorn, but he had the claws of a griffon and bat wings and he had a craaaaazy cutie mark - it was a sword surrounded in flames with three lightning bolts bursting out of it!"

"How ostentatious!" sniffed Rarity, unimpressed.

"That's not all,  though!" Pinkie continued, getting more and more excited. "He had these marking on his face like a wolf's and he had long fangs and... oh, he had spiky hair, and some of it was brushed down over his eyes making him look totally mysterious. And his eyes were dragons' eyes, just like Spikey Wikey's! And he shot lightning out of his eyes and he had the power to freeze things with his breath and and and…"

It was all too much for Fluttershy, who flew under the table with a yelp.

"Oh, don't be so silly Fluttershy," said Twilight. "There are no records of such a ridiculous pony ever having existed in Equestria, even back in the Dark Ages. It's just a figment of Pinkie Pie's tainted-apple-danish-fuelled imagination."

Fluttershy nodded, but it was only with some gentle coaxing from Spike and Luna that she at last came out from under the table.

"I remember the last time we met, dear Fluttershy," said Luna suddenly. "Are you really so fearful that mere words can scare you?"

Fluttershy nodded. "Oh, yes." She lifted her eyes and counted off in her head. "Words, loud noises, sudden movements, anything I'm not expecting, actually. Ever since I was a little filly I've been afraid of my own shadow."

Luna laughed. "Afraid of your own shadow? That charming silhouette?" She waved a forehoof towards where Fluttershy's shadow was splayed along the surface of the cloud behind her.

The Pegasus blushed deeply. "Well, I suppose it doesn't look at all that scary right now," she said. "But sometimes…"

Everypony was looking at her shadow when it suddenly grew larger, like a balloon filling with air, and the larger it got, the more grotesque its appearance became, as it grew spines and spurs and a huge maw of shadowy teeth. Then it snapped off from the real Fluttershy and leaped at the seated ponies, scattering them even as it dissipated into a purple mist.

Fluttershy fell off her seat sideways, and lay on the cloud mewling in terror, while Rainbow Dash jumped onto the table to interpose herself between the monster and her friends. Rarity had leaped into Applejack's arms and was clinging to her, shivering, and Spike was cowering under the table where he had crawled as soon as the shadow had appeared.

Twilight, however, was clopping her hooves together in delight. "Umbramorphic magic!" she cried. "Oh, I've only ever read about it in books. I never thought I'd ever get to see it."

Celestia was far less pleased and leveled a dark look at her little sister. "Luna, can we perhaps for once have a meal without some trick of yours?"

Luna lowered her face, chastised. "I'm sorry sister. I just wanted to make everypony laugh." She looked across at where Fluttershy was still cowering and she reached down and drew her up onto her hooves again. "My sincerest apologies. I did not mean to terrify you so – I only wished to amuse you."

"Oh, it was very… funny, Princess," said Fluttershy, smiling weakly as she took her seat again. But she was still shivering.

Luna looked at the Pegasus mare's wide eyes and the fine sheen of sweat on her face and suddenly felt remorseful. With a quick sparkle of magic she conjured up a yellow rose from thin air and levitated it over to her.

"I hope we can still be friends," said Luna.

"Oh, thank you Princess," said Fluttershy, snatching the flower from the air. "It's… beautiful. But - how… how did you know that I love flowers?"

"I suppose I can see it in your eyes," said the Princess cryptically. Then an almost imperceptible smile settled upon her lips. "Which reminds me! Since you love flowers, I have no doubt you know that the Canterlot tulips have just come into bloom..."

"Oh yes," said Fluttershy, her eyes growing wide in excitement. "I've heard they're most beautiful during the Spring Moon."

"Indeed they are," said Luna. "But maybe you did not know that I have the largest collection of them in all of Equestria in my private garden. You would be most welcome to view them, of course."

"Oh, I'd love to," said Fluttershy. "As long as it's alright with you…"

"It would be our pleasure!" said Luna with a wink. "Think of it as an apology for my earlier joke."

"It was a totally awesome prank, Princess " said Rainbow, who was still chuckling at the memory. She turned to Pinkie. "But don't think that that prank is going to let you get out of telling us about the sort of pony you really like, Pinkie Pie!"

"Well," said Pinkie, bringing a forehoof to her chin. "Just like I like all sorts of baked treats, I like all kinds of ponies."

"Now Pinkie, darling," said Rarity. "I'm not sure if that comparison is at all appropriate."

"Oh, but it is!" replied the little pink pony, grinning. "You see, romance is just like baking a cake..."

Rarity snorted. "Oh, how in Equestria can romance be like baking a cake, darling?"

"Well," said Pinkie earnestly. "Making a cake is all about choosing the right ingredients. First you have to take some flour, and then add some butter and eggs - oh oh oh! – and some sugar. You mix it into a super-sticky batter and then you put it in an oven at…"

"Ah don' see how this has anythin' ta do with romance," said Applejack.

"'Romance'?" repeated Pinkie, blinking. Then her eyes sparkled. "Oh, yes! Romance!  Well, a good romance needs just the right ingredients as well." She started to count off things on one hoof. "You need to have some things in common. Maybe just teeny-tiny little things, but they're super important!"

"What kind of things, Pinkie Pie?" asked Spike.

"Well, say I was to end up in a romance with somepony," said Pinkie. "If they either liked cupcakes or sarsaparilla or pranking or pink or…" She giggle. "Well, you get the idea! But if they didn't like any of those things, well – things probably wouldn't work out."

"But what if they didn't like parties?" asked Fluttershy. "Wouldn't that make things really, really difficult?" She smiled shyly. "I mean, with you being Ponyville's premier party pony and all."

Pinkie nodded. "Oh, exactamondo Fluttershy! I was just getting to that. It's just like when you're making a cake the recipe asks for almonds and you only have peanuts –  if you add peanuts the cake will turn out different, but it's still going to turn out absotively scrumptious! But if you put something craaaaazy like earthworms in it-"

Everypony's eyes looked at Applejack, who grinned in sudden embarrassment.

"-well, you're going to end up with a baked bad!" finished the little pink pony. "So if a pony didn't like parties, well - somethings just aren't meant to go together!"

"Ah ain't never going ta live down those baked bads, am ah?" muttered Applejack to nopony in particular.

"Well, I thought they were delicious," said Spike. "Say Pinkie Pie – why don't you whip us up a batch when we get back to Ponyville?"

Celestia brought her head close to Twilight's and asked discretely "What are these 'baked bads' your friends are talking about? I've never heard you mention them in any of your reports."

"It's a long story, Princess," replied Twilight, a little uncomfortably. "It's one of those things that I didn't think was important enough to bother you with."

"But they sound so amusing!" continued Celestia. She sighed. "I suddenly realise that there's so much about your everyday life in Ponyville that I know nothing about."

"I'll be happy to tell you whatever you want to know, Princess," said Twilight with a blush.

Pinkie was still in full flight. "….and of course the temperature of the oven is super important as well. So if they love each other toooo much, then things can end up all burnt! But if they don't love each other enough, then the whole cake can end up wet and soggy."

Spike's mouth was hanging open. "Wow," he said. "Romance sure sounds complicated!"

"That it can be, young Spike," said Rarity with a chiming laugh. "But it is worth the trouble." She slipped a forehoof into Applejack's under the table, making the earth pony flush red, and then turned to Pinkie. "I sincerely apologise, Pinkie Pie – your analogy was most fitting."

"Oh, I don't have any allergies," said Pinkie happily. "Except maybe sneezing powder."

The conversation had however raised Luna's spirits and she clopped her hooves together in delight. "Never before have I heard love described in such succinct terms!" She leaned across the table to Pinkie. "I must say that all this talk of baking has suddenly reminded me, Pinkie Pie. We have all sorts of delectable sweetmeats ready for our little soiree tonight - the staff of the Castle kitchens have been hard at work making sure that everything is just so!"

"Really?" Pinkie's ears flicked up. "Sweet treats?"

"They have?" asked Celestia, raising an eyebrow. There was something about the smile on Luna's face that she didn't quite trust.

Luna nodded enthusiastically. "Oh yes.  At my personal request. Recently I have gained quite a sweet tooth. Pies, cakes, doughnuts." She turned back to Spike and Pinkie, who were both salivating. "I heard that they initially had some trouble getting all the razzleberry jam into the doubleberry jam explosions, but it seems like they solved the problem – when I checked on things this morning, I saw that there was already a veritable mountain of the treats!"

"A… a mountain?" repeated Spike, his green eyes wide. "A mountain of donuts?"

"Doubleberry jam explosions?" said Pinkie, the final word almost a shriek in her excitement.

"Oh yes!" said Luna, chuckling. "And there are extra-sprinkled triple chocolate crullers as well. Or so the cooks told me – I am afraid I am no expert when it comes to donuts. Perhaps you should investigate and see whether everything is to your liking later."

Pinkie and Spike both looked at each other, excitement glittering in their eyes.

"Oh Pinkie Pie darling," said Rarity with a sigh. "Thinking about your stomach on tonight, the most romantic of all nights!"

"Oh, but it's so hard to be romantic on an empty stomach," said Pinkie thoughtfully. "Your tummy keeps distracting your heart from being romantic with all its grrr-grrr-grrring and rumble-rumble-rumbling! But if it's full, it gets happy and sleepy and then you can be as romantic as you want without your tummy getting in the way."

Luna smiled at the little pink pony. "Why, Pinkie Pie, once again you've reminded me of something else that may be of interest to you all." Her eyes flickered towards Rarity and Applejack. "By chance I was walking on the Eastern Battlements this afternoon and I realised that it's simply the most romantic part of the whole Castle. And so few prying eyes as well! Why, there's never been the need to have guards stationed there, seeing as how it's so remote from everywhere vital to the castle. It would the perfect spot for a romantic assignation…"

"Remote? Romantic? Assignation?" repeated Rarity, her eyes glowing. She turned and whispered to Applejack. "Darling, this is our chance! We must investigate this spot – it would be perfect for setting up a meeting between our two love birds." She looked across the table at Twilight, who was in the middle of taking a sip of tea, and Rainbow, who was busy chewing on a cucumber sandwich, and smiled simperingly.

Twilight frowned and turned to whisper to Rainbow. "Is it just me, or is there something going on with Rarity and Applejack? They've been behaving a bit strangely, don't you think?"

Rainbow shrugged. "You know those two," she replied. "They're always up to something."

On the other side of the table Rarity nudged Applejack and almost made her choke on the cupcake she was eating. "Oh, my mare's intuition is never wrong, darling Applejack! Just look at the two of them together."

Applejack looked across to see Twilight and Rainbow laughing together, and she whispered back to Rarity hoarsely. "Y'know, ah didn't really believe it before, but now that ah lookit them – they're as thick as thieves, ain't they?" She sighed.

Luna, meanwhile, had turned to Rainbow. "So, Rainbow Dash - how are things looking for tonight's display? I've heard from Spitfire that we can expect some astounding feats from the Aerobatics Performance Team."

"Everypony is totally ready and raring to go, Princess," said Rainbow proudly. "Sure, they're a bunch of amateurs, but I think you'll all be surprised by the tricks they're able to pull off!"

"It must have been such a wonderful opportunity to train with Spitfire," said Luna. "She's a marvellous flier, isn't she? So powerful, yet so graceful." She took a sip of tea. "But I must say that you've been an amazing help to her, especially with regards to the last minute rehearsals. When Soarin became... indisposed, Spitfire was quite at her wit's end about how she was going to get everything ready in time. Why, just earlier today she said that she couldn't have done anything without you!"

"She did?" asked Rainbow, her eyes going wide.

Luna nodded. "I'm very much looking forward to what the two of you have in store for us all tonight."

Rainbow didn't reply, but stared off into the distance in the direction of Canterlot peak, where the tiny dots of the Aerobatic Performance Team could be seen spiralling around each other. "I hope Derpy hasn't been causing her any trouble…"

Luna levitated her cup to her lips so that nopony could see the self-satisfied smile that had slipped across them.

And so the high tea slowly came to an end as the sun began to approach the western horizon. The mountains of cucumber sandwiches and snacks had dwindled away into hills and finally molehills, with the ones closest to Pinkie dwindling at a far quicker rate than the others. Twilight and Celestia were deep in discussion about the intricacies of umbramorphic magic, Applejack and Rarity were still feverishly planning, heads glued together, while Fluttershy and Luna were chatting about the correct cultivation of flowers. Pinkie, meanwhile, was busy sneakily taking snacks from the still-full platters on the other side of the table with her serpentine tongue, and Spike had fallen asleep, his face on his chest and half a cream-cake still clutched in a little, clawed hand. And all this time Rainbow was looking forlornly across the landscape at the little black dots, trying to spot which one was Spitfire.

At last Luna stood up and tapped a spoon against the teapot, and once she had everypony's attention she said: "I do so hope everypony has enjoyed our little tea. But my sister's sun is now low on the horizon, so the time has come for me to leave you all and prepare for the rising of the Spring Moon." She turned to Celestia. "Tia, if you would be so kind?"

Celestia nodded and with a brilliant flash of pure white light that radiated from the tip of her horn, the cloud, the darkening landscape, the tables and chairs and all the empty plates and cups and platters all vanished and everypony found themselves back in the inner courtyard of the castle, now lit with torches to ward off the deepening shadows. Beyond the walls the murmuring of crowds could now be heard, indicating that the festival had already begun in the streets of the city.

"Shall we all meet together again on the Royal Lawn as soon as night falls?" asked Luna. "It offers a most excellent vantage point for the fireworks, and I've organised a little picnic so that we shall not go hungry. So please enjoy the evening until then!" She smiled enigmatically. "You'll find that Canterlot is extremely lively during the festival. I trust everypony has some activity to distract themselves with until then?"

Applejack, Rarity, Pinkie, Spike, Rainbow and Fluttershy all nodded enthusiastically.

"I'm going to check out the Castle kitchens!" cried Pinkie Pie. She leaned close to Spike. "I mean, those cucumber sandwiches were perfectly scrumptious, but I think my tummy wants to do a bit more snacking!"

"I know what you mean, Pinkie Pie," said Spike. "I'll come with you - I've got a hankering for some good, old-fashioned Canterlot doughnuts!"

"You really need to get that monkey off your back, Spike," said Pinkie seriously.

"M...monkey?" yelped the little dragon, but Pinkie had already grabbed him and in a pink and purple blur they were gone.

"I think I'll take a walk in your garden and see the tulips," said Fluttershy. "I mean, if that's still alright with you, Princess Luna…"

"Oh, please do," replied Luna. "You'll find my private garden not far from the others. If you get lost, merely ask any of the guards - they will show you the way."

Fluttershy blushed a deep red, and she waved goodbye as she disappeared through the archway that she knew led to the Royal Gardens.

Rarity slipped across to where Rainbow Dash was staring distractedly into the sky. "Rainbow, darling! Perhaps you'd like to show Twilight some of your moves before this evening's entertainment, Rainbow?" she suggested.

"Oh, that would be super cool, Rarity," Rainbow replied. "But I've got to go check if Spitfire needs some help dealing with those amateurs," She frowned. "–especially that Ditzy Doo! Well, see you guys later!" And with that she swept into the air and was gone.

Applejack and Rarity both looked at each other, then at Twilight, then back at each other again.

"Well, I think that I shall take a walk on the Eastern Battlements," said Rarity. "I'm perspiring after all that hot tea and the cool mountain air should prove most refreshing for my complexion!"

Applejack looked left and right. "Uh, ah think ah'll join you, Rarity, on account o' that air being refreshin' an all," she muttered. And then the two of them waved goodbye, with a final bow to the Princesses.

Luna smiled to herself as she watched the two troublemakers leave, and then turned to where Celestia and Twilight were standing, not sure what to do. "My apologies, sister, Twilight Sparkle," she said with a bow. "I must fly. I have some final preparations to attend to before raising the moon. As you know, it has been most mischievous lately and-"

Celestia smiled affectionately at her. "Oh of course, Lulu," she said. "We shall see you at the Royal Gardens later." She winked. "Break a leg!"

Luna grinned at her older sister and unfurled her wings. Then, with a single graceful leap, she flew into the air and was soon enveloped by the approaching darkness.

Celestia turned to Twilight in the now empty courtyard. "So that just leaves you and I, Twilight Sparkle." The Princess smiled, but the smile was masking a nervousness that all of a sudden was swelling up within her.

Twilight looked back at her bashfully. "I guess so, Princess."

Celestia didn't reply, but when the silence became a little uncomfortable, she said "You don't have any plans?"

"Oh no, Princess." Twilight lowered her eyes and stared at the cobblestones beneath her hooves. "I'm just happy to have the chance to talk to you face-to-face rather than via letters!"

Celestia nodded. "So perhaps you'd like to join me for a little walk through the city, then?"

Twilight's heart leaped into her throat as she lifted her eyes and saw her teacher's smiling face. "Oh, yes please!"

to be continued
During high tea, a conversation about everypony's ideal partner leads to some surprising revelations, while Luna continues to conspire to remove all the obstacles from Twilight and Celestia's romantic evening.
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KopaLeo Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
There once was a filly named Pinkie Pie,
Who could travel much faster than light,
She departed one day,
The Pinkie Pie way,
And returned on the previous night.

Limericks yay
NicLove Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"(She slipped a forehoof into Applejack's under the table)" what do you mean? Do you mean that she is hoofing A.J. ?
ZeldaTheSwordsman Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
What made you ditch this one?
Buttersc0tchSundae Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
What do you mean, ZeldaTheSwordsman? It's on part 7 right now, and will be finished in a week's time!

I was on hiatus for a short while, though. I went to Japan and couldn't write a single word since I was so drunk, and also busy watching weird Japanese TV shows.
ZeldaTheSwordsman Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
Oh. Thought it had been abandoned because that was all that was in the group.
Buttersc0tchSundae Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
What group is that, ZeldaTheSwordsman? I'll send links to them right away!
ZeldaTheSwordsman Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
Buttersc0tchSundae Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Just submitted the rest to the good people there, ZeldaTheSwordsman! Thanks. :D
ZeldaTheSwordsman Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
If you want to thank me, please, please, please rewrite "Shipping and Handling" so that it doesn't use the "chat with Discord" and "Screwball is a head-case" plot devices. Those are close to the bottom of the barrel, and you're a better writer than that.
Buttersc0tchSundae Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Tell me more about Shipping and Handling...
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PrincessMolestia Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
man this fic is good! just wish it had more tits.
theycallmemetalchild Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
lol the tragedy/comedy of induction. rarity sees how twlight and celestia are interacting, and yet only notices that which seems to confirm her twidash hypothesis. :iconrarityshrugplz:
DolphinBuster Featured By Owner May 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OH MY GOODNESS, This made me hungry e_e
splash-blue Featured By Owner May 3, 2012
Are you still updating this story?
Buttersc0tchSundae Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes. ;)
Writing of Part 5 has already begun!
We must have moar!
FurryForlife Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, Butters, you tease.

You're graceful in the way you unfold the chapters. The pacing is masterful; neither giving too much as to spoil anything, nor too little as to cause the reader to lose interest. I couldn't find any grammar errors; though I wasn't really looking for any. You've managed to keep me groaning at the right points, and cheering at others. One of my favorite things about your writing is your vocabulary, and your ability to use it in the correct places without making your words sound forced. As always, the story keeps me wanting more, yet glad it ends at that point.

Your faithful fan,
~~FurryForlife~~ ~
Blazecloud-demania Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012
So much suspense!!!!!!
SomeBoozeDear Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012
For whatever-you-want sake i can't tke it anymore. I want the next chapter so badly xD. Well do i really need to say it is great ? It will fill up my sleepless nights thanxxx :3
Buttersc0tchSundae Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The next part shouldn't be very long, SomeBoozeDear - love the name by the way! :love:
SomeBoozeDear Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
As a matter of fact it sums me up pretty well ^^' thank you x3
noideasfornicknames Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012
ALL MY LOVE; have it all, just keep the fics coming XD i love reading your fics :3
Darkwolf6090 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This has to be the best Twilestia fic I've yet read. I do hope part five is soon in coming.
Buttersc0tchSundae Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I hope it won't take long, Darkwolf! :D
Thanos-san Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Finally I got the time to read this! Damn you schoolwork, this has been sitting in my inbox for ages!

So yeah; RariJack (which I only like when it's in your stories xD ), DashFire (which is my favourite pairing that involve RD), and Twilestia (which I usually don't support, but I'm intrigued by in this story) =D
Auraion Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012
Ah dang it, I just read your reply on my "appledash" comment. Now I feel like a dick. I'm quite sorry, I was just joking.

I started reading this a few days ago and I'm liking it so far,\
except the implications of SpikexPinkie

I totally loved the RariJack parts, it feels like a nice treat, and I gotta love the continuity with Swayback

Looking forward next chapter!
Buttersc0tchSundae Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha! No, never - I'm pretty hard to offend, CB. I knew it was a joke. :iconpinkiepieexcitedplz:

Also, you don't need to worry about Spike - Pinkie, it's not going to happen in this story - I think. :|

Hey, but it's good to hear from you. Don't be a stranger! I tried to visit the flockdraw a few times, but noone is ever there. Did you guys disband or change the room or something?
Auraion Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012
ah flockdraw, I stopped going there for a while, now there's no one.
There were lots of people leaving because of disagreements and stuff. Seems it's finally done.

To tell the truth, I've been away from the pony fandom. Did you hear that MLP got its own board on 4chan? I checked the main page and it's horrible.
Nowadays I go to /vg/, the new videogames board, and to the Team Fortress 2 General. I love it, it's like MLP General threads back when they were good, people being friendly and trying to help each other.

OH by the way, I have one of them pony tumblrs now, feel free to ask a question.

Buttersc0tchSundae Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Goddamit! Just when I wanted to check it out. :iconsadtwilightplz: What is it with groups imploding all the time? Did the explosion claim shutterflye as well?

/mlp/ is better than /co/ pony threads were, but that's barely saying anything. :/

Hey, I love the tumblr! I'll totally send you a question when I think of one. :P
Fridel2 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012
I LOVE limericks :D (Smile)
I imagined Pinkie Pie saying: "grrr-grrr-grrring and rumble-rumble-rumbling!" And I just couldn't stop grinning.
Oh and this has been the best part so far.
I wonder... Is "much ahoof about nothing" based on, inspired by or a parody of "Much ado about nothing"? Or did you simply just borrow the clever name? (I adore that movie B. T. W. Saw it in tenth grade)
Buttersc0tchSundae Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, it's kinda just a pun on the name, but some Shakespearean comedy stuff has managed to creep into it as a result. :D Thanks for your comment, Friedel!
Fridel2 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012
Oh, I see ^^
You're very welcome.
Fridel is always on duty, tehe.
Nova225 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012
>"Oh, you know," said Rarity, arching her eyebrows. "As if we were missing something?"
-Rarity, thinking she’s subtle and all-knowing about romance... again...

>"I once saw him fight a dozen ursa majors at the same time! With his bare hooves!" Her eyes went wide.
-Somehow, I ‘’think’’ she may be embellishing facts... maybe just a little.

>"No – but let's just say the fact that there's a comet called 'Darkmane' that visits Equestria every hundred years is not a coincidence."
-Well, at least she varies things a little.

>"He was an alicorn, but he had the claws of a griffon and bat wings
-Is it just me, or does this sounds ‘a bit’ like Discord ? A cousin, maybe ?

>"Doubleberry jam explosions?" said Pinkie, the final word almost a shriek in her excitement.
-Double the jam, double the fun ;) ...also, donuts CAN explode twice!.. with flavor. ;)

>I've got to go check if Spitfire needs some help dealing with those amateurs," She frowned. "–especially that Ditzy Doo!
-Bashing on Ditzy ? ...really... she may be a bit clumsy at times, but don’t forget that she’s still a professional mailmare. (also, never forget adorable Dinky)


A pretty ‘ok’ chapter... Not sure why people throw stuff at Derpy/Ditzy JUST because she’s a bit clumsy *occasionally*, but whatever.
Buttersc0tchSundae Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, it's pretty much canon now that Rainbow finds it difficult to tolerate Derpy and that's what I was playing to. Now offence to the darling little creature! :D
Nova225 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012
Well... RD also have, occasionally, troubles tolerating Pinky Pie's Super-Energetic nature, but there are still best friends. :)
SergeantBuck Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Student Writer
How in the world did this smile get on my face? And why won't it leave?

I need to read more of your material! I could learn a thing or two from you!
horribleham Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012
I can't wait for more! I am a fan of all your work!
Buttersc0tchSundae Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks horribleham! :D
doctordapples Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012
Took me forever to read this, but today seems like a pretty good day for it.

Happy Valentine's Day, Butterscotch!
GMoss96 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Finally got to read. wow that was long XP

The only problem i found for myself that is is when they were going back and forth about romance . Pinkie starts talking the it goes to Fluttershy then back to Pinkie. Personally it was okay but it could have been written better or some of it left out. BUT, thats coming from an artist and your a teacher so u should know more about this find of stuff ^^;

Hahaha take that Rarity! Your plan is foiled and Luna wins again! Luna-1 Rarity-0 :iconsuperw00tplz: and now Tia and Twi are finally alone :D maybe now they can find there true feeling for each other? And maybe you will actually FINISH THIS ONE UNLIKE BUTTERS' ADVENTURES IN EQUESTRIA! Like come on....I fucking LOVE that story and would die to see it get finished :no:

ANYWHO! Great story, cant wait till next :meow:

Oh! before i forget! "Luna clopped her hooves together. 'A most appropriate answer!' she said. 'Don't you agree, sister?'

'Of, I would have expected nothing else from my favourite student,'" I has found a typo/missing word slot! Sorry grammar nazi coming out :icongrammarnaziplz: lol
Buttersc0tchSundae Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hey GMoss! Thanks for your comment - in depth as always! :D

But I'm not exactly sure what you mean about the Pinkie - Fluttershy conversation. Did I give the wrong dialogue to one of them? Can you be a little more specific? Is it confusing? It's the only way I'll learn! :iconpinkiepieexcitedplz:
GMoss96 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The conversation was just...different. If just felt like it was free floating, like it was lightly on Pinkie and then it went to Fluttershy and then finally landed on Pinkie. Home it helps some :iconpinkiepieplz:
Buttersc0tchSundae Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm still kinda not sure, but I'll reread the thing when I get time and see if I can't smooth things out.

Thanks GMoss! :D
GMoss96 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no problem, i didnt see anyone else comment about it so it may just be me :iconstormbreacherplz:

Any time Butters :meow:
SorcerusHorserus Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Hnnnng! What's going to happen next?! The suspense!
DazRomance Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
Man this is soooooo sweet ! Too bad that stopped right where i wanted it to continue forever.... Please MOAR !
Buttersc0tchSundae Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Moar soon, DazRomance! :)
Valenti-Angae Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
It behooves me to continue reading this awesome story. :3
Buttersc0tchSundae Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heheh! Thanks Paradox!
Valenti-Angae Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
You're welcome! ;P
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